BrainworkInProgress's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Depressing Story]

Decent

Considering this is your first flash I find this a rather decent one.

But here are some things you might consider changing.

- Background: Add one, now it feels so empty.
- Explosion: Not nearly the blast of a real creeper!
- Sound: The explosion is rather weak sound-wise as well.
- The ending: the "trolololol" music feels out of place and unnecessary
- Buttons: Play buttons are an animators friend.

Anyways keep working hard on improving!

Bubbleriderlbp responds:

Ok, I'll consider that. I agree with you about 95%. Thanks.

[Pencilmation: Hank]

Hehe.

Poor fellow never has luck on his side! Anyways I'm a fan of the series, I'd love to see more pencilmations! Keep up the work!

[LoulouVZ Random]

It's decent but...

Seeing the whole franchise which Egoraptor started on newgrounds, I think graphical wise it was decent. Much better than what alot of the NGers that work this style whip up. But... No where close to the top in this "area of animation". And personally I suggest you look for your own style in animation.

[W.A.R]

One of my personal favourites.

I can only say one word to describe this: "AMAZING"

This is one of the greatest flash's I've seen in my oppinion. The fact you animate this greatly with pencil tool, detail aswell as smoothness of the animation. I love it!
Great job, I cant wait for something new of you to come by!

[Sunshine course]

Decent

It was a decent flash, I only have a few remarks wich might improve it.

- Blood and gore: There just wasnt enough because some lost blood, others that lost their heads didnt etc...
- The stickman didnt look really proportionate and the movements seemed abit off.

Anyways it was still decent.

[The Green Line Collab]

Yay!

It's finally out!

Great job everyone who worked on this I only have one comment.

Where is my skull picture? Q_Q it was entried before the collab was full and it was my masterpiece.

>:( shame on you liquify

ANYWAYS <3 IT

[Stranglechoke]

I liked it.

Animation 7.5/10

Even tough the animation wasnt very detailed I have to say it still looked really interesting and I loved the smoothness of your fbf! Good job!

Sound 6.5/10

The soundfiles werent that high quality but still decent!

Humor - N/A

it was kind of predictable but still enjoyed.

Overall: - Good flash! Keep up the work!

[Every Everything Ever #1]

Great!

Another great flash as usual wonchop!

Keep it up!