BrainworkInProgress's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vegeta Soundboard OceanV1]

Brush it up!

I suggest that in V2 you work on the graphics alot.

Make your buttons look more appealing, change the font.
And a button-click animation.

[Newgrounds medals: EXT]

The Medal Review.

MASTER OF SECRETS: it does work contrairy to what some say, go to the credits section and press tab, you'll see the button highlighted, its situated above the add.

CURIOUS: go to top medal point users

INFORMED: go to medals info

MEDALS: go to NG official medals

SUPER-INFORMED: go to medals cods

PLEASE NOT AGAIN: go to ugolegend94

[AS3 Introduction]

Helpfull!

I must say, this tutorial is well done as in easy to follow and comprehend.

Perhaps if you're ever deciding to make a new tutorial perhaps make like the little man with his pencil animated with some different movements just to make things more intresting.

None the less, good job!

[Penguin Dress Up]

Hrmm...

I'm not a too big fan of dress-up games when I see one, but I do vote em correctly if they are well done but sorry.. This one was bad.

- The graphics just didnt do it to make it as a dress-up game on newgrounds in my oppinion - And "The graphics are ment to be horrible" - Lamest excuse ever.
- What I did like was the fact you did start with alot of options to do unlike those where you have like 4 different outfits and thats it. Also the penguin-idea is rather original.

[Rookie Sniper: Training]

What are the odds!

Hey there! Somehow I managed to see this version.

Shamefully you only fixed the AIM-Bug which i mentioned in my previous review.
Anyways I'm going to repeat myself here.
-Try improving graphics
- Moving targets that go past couple of windows etc...

[Mousecontrolled Snake]

It's okay.

I do like the concept of the mouse-controlled snake but I did find a glitch.

Namely if you turn to sharp, you somehow "touch" yourself and lose while you can clearly see the first dot not touching anything.

Furthermore all I can suggest is perhaps work abit on the graphics, the touch outlines and changing the text to english.

Anyways, good attempt.

[Fatman Go!]

Fun game!

Love this game!

It was challenging enough with the combo of timing your jump + Fatarang.
Good job!

[Learn to Fly !]

I liked it!

One of the more challenging distance games ( in early levels )...

the 6000ft achievement was rather easy tbh.

- Launch yourself with a corner that would give you around 15-20% Resistance.
- Burst your rockets just enough so you dont hit the red speed area.
- Stop to let it drop again ( keep your angle ) till your speed drops to +/- 170
- Burst again till 200
- Repeat that step till you're out of fuel.
- When out of fuel alter your corner so you have 0% air resistance ( if you gain speed to 200 again , boost your angle up for a quick moment till you're at 180 again )

And then you should have your first bounce at like 4000+, your second at 5500+ and EZ-moad trough the 6000 cap!

Oh extra note: Rather stupid the cinematics start as soon as you reach 6000 instead of letting you end your game first :(